A ghoul or two
have
come to you
You
only took
three
seconds, or four
to
open the door
Five
ravens, no, six
began
flapping their wings
Wisps
of mist,
seven,
eight,
rose
from the grave
Then
she came
with
nine whispers, or ten
Oh,
the terror, oh, the pain
of seeing her again…
11 comments:
I keep wondering why she keeps coming back? I am far more dead than she is.
Getting in the Halloween mood, I see. :) Excellent.
Nice atmospheric Halloween flavor, and I like the background.
gooder, v ;)
i was truly scared, a few times, watching 'alien' alone, when it first came out...
Maybe that's why she's coming, Mark... :-)
Thanks, Charles! I'm trying to... but I'm not that successful this year... :-)
Thank you, Bernard! I thought a darker background would be more appropriate... :-)
Hey, LW, thanks! :-) You know, I was really scared reading Dracula for the first time... :-)
it definitely has a halloween-y air ;)
and the new skin nicely complements the feeling :)
Love it and love the new theme.
Also, thanks for the comments on my blog :)
Paul
I always enjoy reading your poems, Vesper -- and you evoke such a delightfully atmospheric mood here ;). So glad you visited my blog this weekend. It was wonderful to hear from you again!
Ohhh...I like it Vesper. What a timely work too.
Hugs, G
PS: STILL waiting for books to arrive here, hopefully soon.
Thanks so much, SzélsőFa! I think I'll keep this background even past Halloween. :-)
Paul, thank you, my friend!
Marilyn, it's extremely nice to see you here! Thank you for coming to visit and for your praise.
xoxoxo
Geraldine, thank you so much! Yes, Halloween always puts me a bit in this mood...
xoxoxo
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