blue
bunny blue
in
the blue grass
with
your little blue soul
with
your wonders, your shivers
what
hides in the thick
in
the thick blue thicket
what
crackles, what breaks
is
it the moon
the
cold blue moon
reaching
for you
with
fingers of twigs
with
whispers of leaves
is
it the fox, the swift red fox
the
fiery fox
or
a big blue owl with eyes of moon
blue
eyes of moon
what
is after you
blue
bunny blue
only
a shadow blue
this
time only the moon
blue
bunny blue
The beautiful artwork in this post belongs to Amanda Clark from Earth Angels Art.
At Woven Dreams Geraldine invites us to think about Blue...
18 comments:
I love the artwork and I love your colorful words.
Beautiful.
A wonderful blue vision, V.
My first post to read today, what a beauty. This is breathtaking Vesper, the words and images...
thanks so much for participating for the first week at Woven Dreams, I hope you'll be a regular. :<)
Happy Week, G
Vesper, I would absolutely love to see this poem as a children's book. With the repetition and echoes, and that delightful sense of building, I think it'd be perfectly suited.
This was pure pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Beautiful post. Sarah is right, it needs to be in a book.
You know I don't say this often--but what a lovely poem--I can see it metaphorically but I am choosing not to. Mind if I snag this for my kindergarten and first graders to work on their reading?
Vesper this poem is absolutely amazing :)
Paul, thank you. Glad you like. :-)
Thank you, Bernard, I really appreciate it. :-)
Geraldine, thank you so much. You had a great idea to start these Woven Dreams... :-)
xoxoxo
Sarah, how can I say how happy your praise makes me? I'm beaming! Thank you for having such nice thoughts on my little poem.
Teri, thank you so much, and thank you for visiting. I know that "blue" was your idea - excellent!
Mark, is that you? Is that really you? :-D
Thank you, my friend. Of course, you can read it with the children, I would be honored.
Optimistic Existentialist, thank you so much! Much appreciated! :-)
Stellar piece and artwork!
Tumblewords, thank you so much! And thank you for visiting my blog. :-)
Thank you Kiddo...the kids should be able to read this one without much help (I hope)
very nicely done, v...
mark's right, would be a delight in any children's book :)
nice...i like...it makes me think of a childrens book you know...rhyming and fanciful...enjoyed it much....
nice...i like...it makes me think of a childrens book you know...rhyming and fanciful...enjoyed it much....
Mark, my pleasure...
LW, thank you kindly. :-)
Brian, thank you so much. I appreciate it! :-)
Thank you for sharing my artwork with your beautiful poem. They do go well together.
Earthangelsarts, thank you!
Thank you Vesper for reading and following my story, When Dark Closes In, and for the comments. I'm working on the editing for the next chapter, and installment. I like your poems, Bunny Blue and Dance of Love. Very nice.
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